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InDireNeedSF
01/08/10, 08:24 PM
I know it's pretty mediocre, and not that great but it's meant as more of an emo/pop-punk type song, figured I'd get feedback even tho it prolly won't be good, but that's fine, and I don't think I need to say what it's about, it's somewhat clear but I'd like feedback on that too, thanks

"Decisions We Make"

I'll wait until the clock strikes 6
To take you home, that's where you belong
Not here...
And I've realized what
I've been doing from the start
And I won't stop

So rub your hands down my thighs
And wrap your fingers into mine
Lie back and pull the covers down
Close the door, shut the blinds
No light shines in
We won't get caught
No we won't get caught

(Chorus)
And this is the most selfish
Thing I've done
And I'm disgusted, I'm disgusted
But somehow I can't stop
Somehow I can't stop
And this is the most selfish
Thing I've done
And I've become something I'm not
And what I never wanted to be
What I never wanted to be

I'll send out a S.O.S.
I'm giving you this one last chance
I'm giving you an out
So please run, run as fast as you can
Run, oh run please get away
Before I tear you apart
Before I rip you apart

(Chorus)

Retrace steps
Was this wrong?
And retrace steps

And this is the most slefish
Thing I've done
And I'm disgusted, I'm disgusted
But I can't stop, No I can't stop

(Chorus)

BryterJonah
01/08/10, 10:14 PM
And then I shooooot myseeeeeeeelf

(the end)