If The Future Could Speak

[nickstetina]

One of my first writing experiences that just flowed. I'll def. record a song for this one.

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Could the future just speak
Tell me now, tell me now
What I need to know
Cause I’m flying out of control
A spiraling descent
Cant I land safely?

The wind carries the clouds
Swirls of white behind blue
In front of everything so beautiful
And I still feel compelled to sort out
The things most devastating

“We’ll take it as it comes”
Well, I couldn’t feel any less prepared
But I’ll fly blindly
Into a storm I cant see through
The sky is blackened
But one thing is clear
Hope can overpower fear
But is that really an advantage?
To have any expectations at all

If I can hope for one thing
Id hope that we can see
Clear skies once again
Make it through
Eventually we’ll reach the end
Of this elevated disaster (tragedy)

Could the future just speak
Tell me now, tell me now
Is a warning more suitable
For what’s to come
Or can I relax and enjoy the ride
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let me know what you think, i need some criticism.

[lfdfforever]

great stuff

[a speedo model]

i like it. although, i didn't like the last line for some reason. it just didn't feel like a good ending. but keep it up, i really enjoyed this.

[panic!athedisco]

i like it. although, i didn't like the last line for some reason. it just didn't feel like a good ending. but keep it up, i really enjoyed this.
I agree. everything but that line was amazing.

[matt_rawlings]

I agree. everything but that line was amazing.

You're P@TD?

I never knew they had a girl

[VeritasAequitas]

Too clear. As an artist you're obliged to make everything vague.

Really, nice, although I have to agree with the others on the "punchline"