Tell Me Twice Or Never Say A Word

[lfdfforever]

well, i can picture it, just like a memorie left aside, waiting for relief in rememberig, still i forgot, i thought this would save us, i thought we could be saved, this subject fails to teach any lesson, its matter has no readable maiteral and cause of effect seals in the minor will, where there is an empty ghost, there is a M and E, i dive head first welcoming the threat "you have nothing to lose if all has been lost" use this till you can't use anymore and wake up and remember what this was always for, i know you're there, dangling like a porch light in mid summer, moveing with the pints of wind, softly thinking " i appreciated my time here,in this big but so small world" and the date set, speeds the seconds away, leaving slow untill i can no longer stay, think of this like a chance to change, never insert sadness in your life if not needed, never say "it's never too late, to never show up"

[a speedo model]

good stuff, although if these are song lyrics, try to put them in some kind of order. in this form, it's makes it hard to read. but anyway, good work. your work continues to improve....

[iHATEapril]

This is really good, are you a musician?

[lfdfforever]

This is really good, are you a musician? i guess, i play drums and write lyrics.

[lfdfforever]

oh and thanks for saying you like my work

[nickstetina]

i really enjoyed it. although, can one "think softly"? haha, something i just read and wondered about. it doesnt effect the integrity of the song though.

[lfdfforever]

i really enjoyed it. although, can one "think softly"? haha, something i just read and wondered about. it doesnt effect the integrity of the song though. well if you can think hard, why can't you think soft lol and thanks for liking it