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a speedo model
07/05/06, 08:43 PM
i'm not sure about this one. something i just kind of wrote one morning...


“Our Plan”
They fed our loneliness with clear views of the flowers
Growing just beyond the windowpanes
So we sat with our hands to the glass for hours
As every youthful dream hung between doorframes

So, on the first day of the week
We all took turns swinging from the bell tower
As our parents spoke in arrogant conversations
Our necks stretched like the pews full of souls so distant
Who came at habit or just guilt?
Reciting words they never took the time to understand
The bodies will be found

Give the desperate voice their due
Before your children are led out into the sunlight
Where they see the awful truth
That behind every intention is an even better excuse

So let the gunshot wake the whole neighborhood
They can come running to the rescue
“To find my body in an awful shake”
This time, we will dress in our mistakes
And hate ourselves for them like they always wanted us to

And when dawn strikes, we’ll be found asleep
Laying on our backs in the middle of the street
Giving up, with every breath we release
“The first shot woke the whole house and the second put us back to sleep”
With neckties for blindfolds
And shoelaces tying are hands
This is a dream, this is a dream...

Toss and turn
To the beat of the nightmare that reoccurs
Is it ever really okay?
Falling in between these sheets, the lights burn out
This lullaby offers no release, it’s not okay
So pull the shades closed, like a curtain marking the end of the play
And we can all go home, we can all sleep safe
The murderers have been taken away

So raise your voice, like a glass
As we all sing
“This is all a dream; this is all only a dream”

matt_rawlings
07/06/06, 02:09 AM
Thats probably some of your best work that I've read. Awesome stuff

iHATEapril
07/06/06, 08:12 AM
Really well done.

a speedo model
07/06/06, 08:22 AM
thank you very much to both of you.:)

iHATEapril
07/06/06, 08:28 AM
thank you very much to both of you.:)

Josiah, scroll down the page.

a speedo model
07/06/06, 08:42 AM
Josiah, scroll down the page.

.....?

iHATEapril
07/06/06, 08:46 AM
.....?

I have a new song that no regulars have hit up.

a speedo model
07/06/06, 08:50 AM
I have a new song that no regulars have hit up.

oh, there you go....

nickstetina
07/06/06, 02:53 PM
"Where they see the awful truth
That behind every intention is an even better excuse"

thats my favorite one. at one point you use the word "pew" which i automatically think brand new and for some reason p!atd. but really it doesnt matter, its just a word, anyone can use it or say it, i just thought of brand new's usage of the word in one of their songs.

keep it up, thanks for the help on my lyrics too.

a speedo model
07/07/06, 08:55 AM
"Where they see the awful truth
That behind every intention is an even better excuse"

thats my favorite one. at one point you use the word "pew" which i automatically think brand new and for some reason p!atd. but really it doesnt matter, its just a word, anyone can use it or say it, i just thought of brand new's usage of the word in one of their songs.

keep it up, thanks for the help on my lyrics too.

thanks, man. and you're welcome for the help on your stuff.....

lfdfforever
07/07/06, 09:33 AM
awesome work

a speedo model
07/07/06, 02:47 PM
awesome work

thanks, man.

wyverna
07/10/06, 09:22 AM
Josiah, you're just too good at this. You're making the rest of us (namely, me) look bad. Shame on you.

a speedo model
07/10/06, 09:29 AM
Josiah, you're just too good at this. You're making the rest of us (namely, me) look bad. Shame on you.

haha, thank you. :)

ArTkY_
07/18/06, 08:49 AM
Oh man... I love you.

You've inspired me to write more, lol.

a speedo model
07/18/06, 12:24 PM
Oh man... I love you.

You've inspired me to write more, lol.

haha, thanks alot. i've been feeling really inspired lately and alot of poems and lyrics have been coming out. i'll probably post some more next week.

(you better post some more stuff, too! :) )