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xRed-Tidex
01/13/10, 04:58 PM
Well I Am New To The Site..I Was Recommend To post My Lyrics Here...So Here I Am c: Feel free to comment my lyrics..I'm not very good...but I try

Tell Me Hello

Hello Hello
Can You Feel Me?
Hello Hello
Can You Hear Me?
Hello Hello
Can You See Me?
Why Can't You When I'm Right In Front of You?

Screaming Out Until I Can't Breathe
Pursuing You
Won't You Notice Me?
These Tears Keep Falling Down
And It's Killing Me
Killing Me
I Can't Breathe
Please Tell Me Hello


Drowning Softly
Within My Sorrows
Falling Slowly
Into An Endless Abyss
My Life Is Slowly Fading
And I'm Blinded By Intoxication


Screaming Out Until I Can't Breathe
Pursuing You
Won't You Notice Me?
These Tears Keep Falling Down
And It's Killing Me
Killing Me
I Can't Breathe
Please Tell Me..

Don't Fade Away
You Don't Know
Me..
What A Lie
That You Have Said..
Please Please
Don't Fade Away
Just Turn Around
And Tell Me
If Only Just A Whisper..
Please Tell Me
Hello

EndHasAStart
01/14/10, 03:04 AM
Very generic. But my main reason for commenting is to tell you that in the English language, you do not capitalise every damn word.

xRed-Tidex
01/14/10, 06:33 AM
I know that..it just helps me read it better. Like when I'm looking at the lyrics after editing a ot and I start to sing it..when it's not capitalized I tend to mess up a lot more

jamesjohnson
01/23/10, 09:05 PM
A little cliche for my taste, I agree with the capitalization, I think in my head I'm accenting too many words since they are captialized.