UnMade Beds

[wyverna]

Unmade beds are crying out to me
I'm sick to death of living out of (in a) suitcase
The baggage on my back isn't going anywhere and neither am I
Turn the lights out, turn myself in
Once last glance around the room before it's time to leave for good
I've left nothing of importance behind unless you count a wasted month of my life
The maid cleans everything away but I'm still a mess
Hand the key in at reception and settle the tab up front
Honey, tell me, how much are you worth?
Give the man a discount, you know it pays to be polite
Muffled expletives resound through the room as the suitcase quietly observes
Let's just close the lid on this
Close the lid on life

[a speedo model]

i like it, especially the closing line. it ended it very well i thought. good job.

[wyverna]

thanks :)

[wyverna]

where is everyone?

[a speedo model]

where is everyone?

that's what i was thinking....

[wyverna]

that's what i was thinking....

I've only seen you and rawlings around lately. i think james has gone to florida for two weeks, though.

[a speedo model]

I've only seen you and rawlings around lately. i think james has gone to florida for two weeks, though.

i've seen Mike around, but not in here. and i do think James is gone.

[wyverna]

i've seen Mike around, but not in here. and i do think James is gone.

mike should come back here. i didn't realize how little an amount of people we had here until some left. if that makes sense.

[a speedo model]

mike should come back here. i didn't realize how little an amount of people we had here until some left. if that makes sense.

yeah, there's only like five or six of us regulars in here. when one or two leave the place feels so empty.

[wyverna]

yeah, there's only like five or six of us regulars in here. when one or two leave the place feels so empty.

it's really weird. i also don't really think of myself as a regular, haha.

[a speedo model]

it's really weird. i also don't really think of myself as a regular, haha.

i consider you a regular just because your pretty good about commenting on other people's stuff and when you do post something it's regular material, if you know what i mean.....

[a speedo model]

damn, i'm trying to write this song and it's becoming quite a pain. i've only got one verse completed.....:(

[wyverna]

i consider you a regular just because your pretty good about commenting on other people's stuff and when you do post something it's regular material, if you know what i mean.....

yeah, i know what you mean. i like this forum, though. it's friendly.

[wyverna]

damn, i'm trying to write this song and it's becoming quite a pain. i've only got one verse completed.....:(

I actually wrote a song instead of a poem the other day! I don't think it's much good, though, I wrote it in a spare half an hour when I should've been writing an essay.

[a speedo model]

yeah, i know what you mean. i like this forum, though. it's friendly.

yeah, i like it. i remember when i first joined this place was full. there were alot of regulars who were really, really good. but they all left.....

[a speedo model]

I actually wrote a song instead of a poem the other day! I don't think it's much good, though, I wrote it in a spare half an hour when I should've been writing an essay.

i'd like to see, i'm sure it's better then you think.

i actually just finished a bridge of sorts, i really like it. i just sometimes get stuck when i'm writing. i know what i want to say but i can never get it out the right way. i'm really liking the way this one is coming out, though.

[wyverna]

i'd like to see, i'm sure it's better then you think.

i actually just finished a bridge of sorts, i really like it. i just sometimes get stuck when i'm writing. i know what i want to say but i can never get it out the right way. i'm really liking the way this one is coming out, though.

yeah, i know what you mean, i always have the words in my head but they get stuck coming down the pencil, and then i listen to other artists that i admire and i feel like they say things so much better than i do.

i might post the song in this thread later, mainly because i can't be bothered making a new one.

[a speedo model]

yeah, i know what you mean, i always have the words in my head but they get stuck coming down the pencil, and then i listen to other artists that i admire and i feel like they say things so much better than i do.

i might post the song in this thread later, mainly because i can't be bothered making a new one.

it's weird, but i actually found i write better on the computer...i don't know why but i can usual sit down, just start typing and something good comes out....i wrote more then half of my concept album on the computer....

[wyverna]

it's weird, but i actually found i write better on the computer...i don't know why but i can usual sit down, just start typing and something good comes out....i wrote more then half of my concept album on the computer....

i have a lot of weird ways of writing. if i'm writing stories, then it has to be on the old laptop (with only a floppy disk drive and no internet connection). if it's poetry/lyrics, then it's always pen and paper (usually because i'm half asleep in the middle of the night). and if it's an essay, then it has to be on the computer.

it's just how i roll

[a speedo model]

i have a lot of weird ways of writing. if i'm writing stories, then it has to be on the old laptop (with only a floppy disk drive and no internet connection). if it's poetry/lyrics, then it's always pen and paper (usually because i'm half asleep in the middle of the night). and if it's an essay, then it has to be on the computer.

it's just how i roll

the only time i write with pen and paper is when i have inspiration and i'm afraid i'll lose it. like sunday, i had inspiration so i grapped a pen and wrote a poem down on my bulletin. it really depends on the situation...

[a speedo model]

gotta go, Grace. bye.

[wyverna]

byeeeee josiah

[a speedo model]

i'm bringing this thread back, so who's on?

[wyverna]

Me, as usual. Can't see anyone else though.

[a speedo model]

Me, as usual. Can't see anyone else though.

hey, Grace, how you doing? i'm really bored.

[iHATEapril]

I really like it, it's well done.