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Mike Smith
01/24/10, 01:11 PM
Yeah, you can fight my denial
Down to the very last detail
Pawn me off, sell me for retail
But damn I can tell your past that point
So lets get together, smoke some joints

Look I dont disagree but look at me
Im not even worth a dollar twenty three
Not even worth a discount, Buy one, get two free

Marked down by your follies
I rode ya like i rode tha trollies
When we used to go out of town
Down, down, down, South is what I'd say

Its a sequence of events, lacking common sense
A simple sentence of the past tense
Always spittin out my two cents cause nothins ever free
But baby you know one day it could be

I could take ya home, all alone
Flick off tha lights, and see where we'd go
Or maybe we'd even pack us a bowl
In tha halls of my building lets hope we don't get caught
But babygirl i got what you want,
Spittin out this rap like a butcher at the meat shop
A new product thought up, from the top up
Then broken back down, south that's all I'll say

Cause babe:
Its a sequence of events, lacking common sense
A simple sentence of the past tense
Always spittin out my two cents cause nothins ever free
But baby you know one day it could be

Baby i got a big mouth, but an even bigger tongue
And i thought I'd state that just for the fun
My sense of humor it weighs me down like a ton; of bricks

Cause babe:
Its a sequence of events, lacking common sense
A simple sentence of the past tense
Always spittin out my two cents cause nothins ever free
But baby you know one day it could be

Mike Smith
01/29/10, 05:38 PM
Bump....anyone got a critique?