01/28/10

[davehennessy]

the forehead is a globe
eyes are islands
i'm squinting and sending off storms
trying to see what went wrong
fix it with the future
never look back on your torn sails
only look the way of the wind
take me away, I hope to feel something
anything
but i'm just out at sea
gulls and debris, my friends
come and go
and i'm lonely again

I wish my traveling wasn't my trend

[I'mAGetUpKid]

This is excellent. Seriously. I love it. Do you have music for it?

[davehennessy]

thank you, nah I don't have music for that.. I actually wrote it as a poem and not lyrics. I do write music though http://www.myspace.com/davehennessymusic

[chrislauren]

this is so lovely. i wish i was able to write like this. do you write a little at a time, or does it just come out at once? really good!

[davehennessy]

this is so lovely. i wish i was able to write like this. do you write a little at a time, or does it just come out at once? really good!

thank you. I usually write individual poems all at once.. lyrics I tend to write over a period of time, longer than just one sitting

[jcrawfish]

i thought it was pretty nice

[guywithadream]

cool