Don't Get Kicked in the Face

[ClydeMcAllister]

Don't Get Kicked in the Face

[Verse 1]
Keep walking down this one way road [1]
You'll never make it home

[Chorus]
Abandon all you know,
This is the life that you came here for
You pretend that I'm just a stranger
And leave me with loneliness [2]

[Verse 2]
Oh and its such a shame.
You don't remember the life you led.
You'll never have to feel ashamed,
You see me but it's not the same
Surrender to memories

[Chorus]
Abandon all you know
This is the life that you've always wanted
You pretend that I'm just a stranger
And leave me with loneliness


Go on live your new life, redefine,
And surrender to memories
If you got everything you came here for
Then why turn back now?

[Bridge]
So much for saving you
I always did the best I could
[B]You're gone but your halo still sits around my neck [3]
But even if you end up just like them
I'd still miss you.

[Chorus/Outro]
Abandon all you know
Abandon all you know
Go on live your new life, redefine,
And surrender to memories
Abandon all you know
This is the life that you've always wanted
Go on live your new life, redefine,
And surrender to memories

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Okay so this one came out pretty good, save a few lines:

1. Walking down this one way road Kind of a weird line to start the song. One way road sounds just a bit silly...any ideas?

2. And leave me with loneliness Again, it just doesn't sound right. I had the melody down before the words and I fit this in there. "Loneliness" really fits with the idea and meaning behind the song, so this line might just have to stay awkward.

3. You're gone but your halo still sits around my neck This line isn't bad, I just seems out of place with the rest of the section. It might just be me though.

And suggestions/comments, fire away!
I posted a few sets of lyrics on this board a while back and just forgot about it. Think I'll be poasting moar over here. w00t.

[DaKilla623]

Cliche and did not grab my attention.