untitled song

[assasiNATE]

so yeah i wrote a song and here it is

(verse 1)

its the dark, yeah i'm scared
its whats lurking in the forest, its that scary pedobear
north korea, oh kingda ka
the situation keeps on spinning but if it stops then we all fall
kill'em quick make it fast
if the whole wide world is burning then know one will ever ask

(verse 2)

proud to be American
i have the to bear arms, i am my own lethal weapon
but how my mind, oh how it shifts
how it stops and then it stalls oh how i wish that i drove stick
but it don't matter when you drive off a cliff
hey boy you're outside of your mind, trust me i'm well equipped for it

(chrous)

queens born, jersey bound
this is born to be dangerous, way its bred
it wont go silent without sound

queens born, jersey bound
this is born to be dangerous, way its bred
it wont go silent without sound

(verse 3)

yes i'm sick, and i'm upsessed
its these quotes thata i've been crying, i recite but no success
and how mind starts to crack
but with the last breath that's in me i will start an avalanche
and bring us down, straight to the ground
we've been floating in space too long so our ears wont hear a sound

(chorus)

queens born, jersey bound
this is born to be dangerous, way its bred
it wont go silent without sound
queens born, jersey bound
this is born to be dangerous, way its bred
it wont go silent without sound

(musical bridge)

(chorus)

queens born, jersey bound
this is born to be dangerous, way its bred
it wont go silent without sound
queens born, jersey bound
this is born to be dangerous, way its bred
know a bomb they don't go silent without sound

thoughts?

[DaKilla623]

The opening did not grab my attention, "I have the to bear arms" ?, and "if the whole wide world is burning then know one will ever ask" ?