Re-Invented

[bass ampss]

We're in new skin and feeling better than ever.
To coincide with your being is the bane of mine.
So next time you lie, think twice about who you tell.
Word eventually will get around,
And you can't seem to make enough excuses.
We're better off now, we're better off forever.
But we're in new skin and feeling better than ever.
We're in new skin and feeling better that you left.
Feeling better that you lied to us about wanting to be a part of it
So next time you lie, think twice about who you tell.
Word will eventually get around,
And you can't seem to make enough excuses.
You're not going anywhere now, you're not going anywhere forever.
But we're in new skin and feeling better than ever.

I've come to learn that even when I try and write differently, it still comes out generic as fuck. Should I just stop trying to write?

[ticklemyfancy]

to be honest it isn't very good, but keep on writing, you've got some potential

[a speedo model]

i actually kind of liked this. i wouldn't say "it's the best thing i've ever read" but i enjoyed it. keep it up, man.