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lfdfforever
07/26/06, 08:48 PM
it's impossible to say sorry to your own face
so i'm letting go of the problems we grip
i can only hope this doesn't mold into something worse but if it does
i have to make my spot between,over and under
right there stoped alone
wishing for the only dot of truth you had
"if it wasn't good it was ment to be bad"
the hour left in our broken clock has numbers we don't understand
why can't we chance for the best, instead of always falling into something worse
if this is what's left of life
how will death be
will i change into a something that was never me


i'm scared, i'm really not dreaming these days, i feel like i'm burning and put out at the sametime

a speedo model
07/27/06, 06:19 AM
good stuff. i didn't enjoy this as your previous ones, but this good none the less. keep it up, man.

lfdfforever
07/27/06, 07:31 AM
good stuff. i didn't enjoy this as your previous ones, but this good none the less. keep it up, man. thanks you are the only person who ever comments on my lyrics

a speedo model
07/27/06, 09:36 AM
thanks you are the only person who ever comments on my lyrics

i know and i have no idea why...

TheObserver
07/28/06, 08:26 PM
I thought this was really good. For some reason it seems so honest and personal which I really like.

lfdfforever
07/30/06, 01:45 PM
I thought this was really good. For some reason it seems so honest and personal which I really like. thanks so much

wyverna
07/30/06, 01:49 PM
I didn't really like this, the few spelling mistakes put me off, but you have potential.

Slaytus
07/30/06, 02:21 PM
i liked the overall progression on these lyrics and i loved the finish. Very good

lfdfforever
07/30/06, 03:32 PM
i liked the overall progression on these lyrics and i loved the finish. Very good thanks man