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0b4m4
03/01/10, 02:10 PM
I wrote this when I was pissed off that me and my friend don't talk much anymore because of a little argument. What do you guys think. It's not entirely finished yet. Needs chorus.


I've woken up and I see the green light.
It begs me to stay but I can't move my legs.
I look and I try and I figure it out.
You can't hold a grudge to what you know nothing about.
My praise and my thoughts they don't let me feel.
The feeling of love and knowing I'm real.
All the shit that was said, there's two sides to this truth.
This pair of dice aint about to cut loose.
The time that we have, lets cherish it now.
Before you go and fuck it to hell.
Scaling the red line and walking the blue.
No metaphor just quite rings the bell.
And I look at these white walls and they're far to clean.
It's been so long since we had a chance to be.
Be the grass in the field, the swing in the park.

chrislauren
03/02/10, 12:38 AM
This is reakky good so far! You should post the rest of it when you have it.

chrislauren
03/02/10, 12:39 AM
wow. *really. I'm tired.

0b4m4
03/02/10, 03:44 PM
It's weird because I wrote this section back like 6 months ago and now me and my friend talk again and are closer than ever. Maybe could a make an interesting element/transition.