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lfdfforever
07/30/06, 09:23 PM
what a weak way to end, say goodbye to the dream in your weekend, these things have bent to a close but this was the last open door, now a minus of hope is the worry in the evening, with young kids only living to become old, why! do they breath only to choke on lungs maybe the sour in pain finds a rain drop of sweet, don't decicde for me, let me fail on my own, don't hold open your hand, i'm nothing but a pile of lifeless sand, the exstince of my body will become unknown with the coming days but my signal will be sent,.............................. ..undoubtfully obvious this is a mess, who can clean-up the after-math of a down-pour, you are the bomb in the crowd, you kill life to cure your speeding death, sad news for the reporter even sader news for you

a speedo model
07/31/06, 08:59 AM
another good one. keep it up, i like this one alot...

lfdfforever
07/31/06, 09:24 AM
another good one. keep it up, i like this one alot... thank you so much

TheObserver
07/31/06, 02:39 PM
Yea this was good. You have music for the stuff you write?

lfdfforever
07/31/06, 02:56 PM
Yea this was good. You have music for the stuff you write? nope not yet, i don't have it recored

lfdfforever
08/02/06, 02:15 AM
bumppppppp

parallelism
08/02/06, 02:18 AM
Agreed, I also like this very much.
Really powerful analogies.

Especially powerful ending.

lfdfforever
08/02/06, 10:48 AM
Agreed, I also like this very much.
Really powerful analogies.

Especially powerful ending. thanks a lot

iHATEapril
08/02/06, 11:01 AM
Good, not your best.

lfdfforever
08/02/06, 12:22 PM
Good, not your best.thanks for liking it G