Exposed (I Actually Do Acknowledge The Existence Of Love Despite Bodies)

[iHATEapril]

The most beautiful people shine in the most peculiar ways
Like when you say "my mistakes are all important, everything happens for a reason."
The glint in your eyes excites all I love about this season
The summer brings out your freckles and the flowers all the same
I've never bloomed so beautifully before you were the sun

The simplicity in the wet air fools us
"Complications come with fall remember"
If we make it through summer
We'll hold on tight through september

Still we must be sure to note
You've broken me and called it fate
Accepting you've let it go
Is much easier when we're face to face
You can't justify it that way
but you've drugged me with that old familiar glow

The simplicity in the wet air fools us
"Complications come with fall remember"
If we make it through summer
We'll hold on tight through september


I can't be sure you know what you've done
but you've taught me what it is to have a heart
and despite our fears of what's to come
We'll always be perfect in each other's arms

[parallelism]

I like this a lot.
It feels really nice to read, haha.

Great imagery, too.

[Slaytus]

the chorus is greatt and its just overall very nice to read.

[wyverna]

I like this (as usual). Well done, Mike.

[OveriseFan]

A cheesy summer love song which discusses all the typical things and rhymes "remember" with "september"...

I like it.

[lfdfforever]

this is really great, good job

[a speedo model]

great job, man. this is one of your best works, in my opinion.

[ParadeInTheRain]

I like this. It opens with intrigue... really like the closing: I can't be sure you know what you've done
but you've taught me what it is to have a heart. The whole piece has a nice, seamless flow to it. Good writing.

[matt_rawlings]

Nice one bruva