Recalling Life

[lfdfforever]

the injustice in us shows
but i'm rewriting my life
next in line was the papers of regret
i made my stand over the wrong choices
but im failing to fall on the right mark
i'm starting to think that i can't do anything else
i have a belief that everythings been done
maybe my wastefull mind will destroy the layer of shallow art
placed on steps to high for a humble reach
i'm losing time and my reason doesn't show
i can't recall or care for your absence
your not here in this space


what is happening to our golden promise
did you trade it in, did you shout and name the sin
did you give it all away just to feel one once of something new


i really hope not
i really do

[a speedo model]

i like this. good job.

[ParadeInTheRain]

Well written, I like the atmosphere you provide when reading.

Just a few typos, though:

next in line were the papers of regret
placed on steps too high for a humble reach

[lfdfforever]

Well written, I like the atmosphere you provide when reading.

Just a few typos, though: yeah i'm pretty bad with typos thanks for liking it though

[lfdfforever]

i like this. good job. thanks pal