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Slaytus
08/03/06, 03:37 PM
one more hour two more lines i havn't slept in like 2 days,i could use some water...or coffee
Been writing my life in lyrics they dont mean a damn thing to me and when i try to make sense of what im writing all i read is "i cant wait to see the day im lookin back at this moment" Its a funny feeling when you dont know where your going but you know things have to be better. It's creepy that the strain on my brain makes me write beautiful sonnets about a life i never lived. My imagination paints scenery from distant places whose air ill never breath. Breathing is such a strange concept. You bring in life and never take note till your lungs cease to work. Is my exhaustion causing me to go off on random monologues or am i following a path?If these lyrics are release then i've escaped the prision thats kept me down for so long. My sighs outnumber my breaths, what time is it? Why is the paper blank? The cap on the pen hasnt been removed.Well ill try again tommorow night afterall sleep is just my dreams in motion while my body is immobile...or something like that. Its kinda sad isnt it...when you write stories you'll never be part of because your to afraid of moving forward

a speedo model
08/03/06, 04:04 PM
not bad. it could use some work i think, it felt a little rough for my taste. but keep it up, man.

Slaytus
08/03/06, 09:09 PM
yeah i wrote this in 10 minutes like i was drivin around wit my friend completely exhausted and thinking about sleep and how i would love to fall asleep but the last few nights had been incredibly fun...but never ending so i just kinda came home and started typing without any editing ill probably do it later tommorow.