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alt_esc
03/19/10, 04:10 PM
Your grace and mistakes make you seem incredible,
What a fancy way to hate my guts.
I found someone who was once aware of a conscious,
I lost my tendency to listen to my own.
An attack of shame beats a merciless attack of rage,
Well, consistency wins any day.
Agree with yourself or call it an argument,
The stats show a loss of dignity in more than half of consumers.
Percentages raise when it comes to casualties and you were always good with numbers,
Mathematics can't help us now-- A theory contradicting your whiteboard.
I wish to hit the mark just right,
My first mistake--I put hope into words.
I'll go out on a limb here and say don't give this a lot of thought.
No, I don't think about it much either.

BlackHeartBook
03/22/10, 04:57 PM
Nice job that was a short concise and satisfying poem

alt_esc
03/22/10, 05:55 PM
thank you. glad you enjoyed.

020jeffs
03/22/10, 06:05 PM
Yeah man
Nicely written, good word play.
keep it up.
:D

mjrebel
03/23/10, 08:45 PM
i think you hit it right on the spot!

alt_esc
03/24/10, 07:25 PM
Thanks for the comments! Please, keep reviewing my posts.