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bizness
03/21/10, 01:07 AM
Hey whats up its Bizness my first thread on here..sometimes i cant sleep cause i just have soo much stuff goin thro my head so im just gonna let it flow in here. Tell me what u think good or bad whatever- Bizness

Why is it everyone has a Dream
but years later they just are just bust
no longer held together by the Seams
Now they black market selling drugs
nothin i can do but give a should shrug
it makes the world seem smaller than a bug
Nothing is pratically easy but instead radically
sneaky
Just no more lies
its an unstoppable infestation
now i see pigs fly
just like the rest of the nation
No more morals and honesty

Everyone looks up to the Liars
I guess i never got my flier
Its no longer the sky is the limit
but hell is a unlocked door
and you need to go in it
Its not gettin better only Worse
With each passing verse its like a Curse
Gettin ready to burst.

DaKilla623
02/07/11, 02:06 AM
Needs improvement. The opening did not grab my attention, "Now they black market selling drugs" ? and "Its no longer the sky is the limit" is cliche.