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020jeffs
03/21/10, 05:16 PM
When I be ripping and tripping I'm never slipping or giving.
I'm living illen and killing the villains that fill in the chilling.
Of a million children beginning a spinning meaning.
Now I'm sitting and hitting the written sh*t that I'm spitting.

Yet not forgetting that I let in the setting that's hot and wrecking yet in.
Every second betting I've never met him and I will get him.
Cretin that's heading towards my mind I find I'm blind.
To the guy that's behind the fine design and I will try to fly high.

Not a screaming demon or beaming visions of leading heathens even.
I'm a speaking beacon teaching and preaching the meaning.
Deepened by people and people's recent achievements.
Leave it to me and believe it can be a proper lot of evil grievance.

Messenger letting ya get in the set of killers.
Mental fluid is ruined I'm chewing secrets I'm a spiller.
Revealing the meaning of living easy I'm chilling.
Killing delusions of movements through time which seems to be idyllic.

020jeffs
03/21/10, 05:16 PM
Alt Esc, if you read, please comment :D

0b4m4
03/21/10, 07:02 PM
It sounds like one of those rap songs I'd actually listen to. One that actually means something.

SLoT
03/22/10, 06:20 AM
It sounds like a heavy simplistic beat would suit this well. I dig the many rhymes not just following a natural flow you throw in a ton of words with syllables that play around not just the entire word. I dig that. It kind of reminds me of Twista's stuff, not lyrical content, just flow.

BlackHeartBook
03/22/10, 04:33 PM
Very cool, I could feel the beat and the words were raw

mjrebel
03/23/10, 08:12 PM
thats some good flow man.