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thecurerocks182
08/08/06, 11:28 AM
Here's lyrics to a song i wrote a few years ago. I think the meaning is quite self-explaintory and with that said, I hope someone likes it.

Alone I stand
to watch the world make its spins
How everything looks so alive
when your...
And all I can do is watch


Burning stomachs inner liner
It wants more than we can feed it
Force a smile nothing more
Its best we veil all feelings
So they can go on living


Now feed us to the eyes
We're shaking and hanging here like a pendulum
Wear us around your necks
I like how i bring the dollar signs out in your whites
And all we can do is pretend
Dont you dare say it, or they'll fade away
Don't you dare say because believing is everything
Nihilism in the hearts of every fortunate body
Don't you dare say it, believing is everything
And all we do is watch


Hear the throats of babies throbbing
Retching teens reporting to porcelin hideouts
Force a smile nothing more
Burying the dead below where the living like to gather
So they can go on and on


Break the silence
Impaled eyes render me like the turning waves
Impaled eyes make me helpless, make me scared
We're selling promises on the street corner, come and get them
It seems so trendy i thought i'd make a profit
For now a days you dont lose legs and arms from being valiant
It's just something we have to do to stay alive
And alone we drown
Watching the world spin behind our lids
Its too late, its too late

a speedo model
08/08/06, 11:56 AM
it's not bad, i wouldn't call it great. there really wasn't anything that blew me away or really drew me in, but it wasn't terrible. keep working on it.

thecurerocks182
08/08/06, 01:03 PM
thanks, i appreciate your input...this isnt my best and i wrote it when i was 15-16 so i dont plan on changing it. Thanks