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Matt Chylak
03/28/10, 10:29 PM
woodfire

burnt brush cleared away in your backyard, lay
down your crook-cut logs like stoic soldiers, standing
one-by-one against the black, hourly rounds drawn long out.
your own branches stir weary lampposts along,
haphazard white lights insectually grown and lost in a blink.
once more. once more. once more. then, gone.

NOW!
roar, flame. quake the dirty saplings and
old newspaper clippings wilting in your savage power.
beseech your botanist for further fuel
even as his entire world shrivels in sight of your delight.
carry on. carry on. carry on. at least until

naught but flickering light, not quite candle-like.
ember, fade into will-o-wisp and blind steamscent. open
your hearth to the final caresses of the wood,
and whisper dying dreams into empty, buzzing space.

Barthelme_fan
03/28/10, 10:42 PM
nice rhythm

Matt Chylak
03/29/10, 08:05 PM
thanks

mjrebel
03/29/10, 10:16 PM
i dont know what to think of this. its definetly got alot of good descriptive words. seems kinda dark. i like it! it goes to show you can write good stuff without a rhymes!