New Song Online!

[smudge]

HEY HEY!

We have a new track from our new EP online over at our myspace!

http://www.myspace.com/smudge

Check it out!
Any feed back would be great!

We'll be mixing the rest of the EP tuesday so should have new tracks online around then also!

Smudge
x

[xTJx]

It's not bad, I'm actually taking time of out my day to listen to it for you.

It seems like the timing on it is awkward, and who ever your singer is, it seems as if he's trying to hard to hit those high notes, and it kinda hurts the ears.

My advice:
- Pick up the tempo of the song
- Add some complexity to it, whether it be chord progression or a different lead guitar part
- Re-vamp the vocals and maybe add some layering

[smudge]

thanks for the reply :)
bigger thanks for having a listen!

should have more tracks up next week, so if your interested check back in a week or so.

Thanks again