Obscurity

[tearsofblack79]

The clock has ticked to obscurity,
Ive vanished to a place where no one knows my identity,
My eyes are sore from the explicit memories come to life,
I scream away my insanity until it goes numb,
Replacing blood with tears,
Waiting for the satanic years to turn to ashes,
Feel my pulse fasten as I gasp for air,
No one knows how bleak I see the world,
No one knows the one thing I seek,
I hear dark voices,
I see no light,
Pain through your blade,
Disturbing words to speak,
I've gone to a place where no one can find me.

[a speedo model]

eh, i didn't really like this. it's nothing i haven't heard before, but it does show some talent and promise. keep it up.

[TheObserver]

you have to realize this is an artform and you need to do what you want instead what might impress someone.