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lfdfforever
08/13/06, 12:23 AM
in the instinct of man there is a plan, a idea called out for supply, the make of demand, our guest write the notes but they throw away every touched pen, double sided realations strike close to a heart's home, "you want me but you need him" indecsion shows it's quailty, i'm sezied and curiously tied, slipping down in the front center row, where words speak louder then actions and the drama in each hourglass sets its self free, i'm tired but sleep does me no good, it's the digging problem keeping me awake, the feet increase and distance is only a trap, i know i can't show my face and i know the memories divide and erase each remembered place

lfdfforever
08/13/06, 07:48 PM
hump

a speedo model
08/14/06, 11:00 AM
i really like this one man. there are alot of really great lines, "slipping down in the front center row, where words speak louder then actions and the drama in each hourglass sets its self free"- i love that part, in fact everything after that was pretty great as well. keep it up, man. this probably one of the best things i've seen you post in awhile.

lfdfforever
08/14/06, 12:25 PM
i really like this one man. there are alot of really great lines, "slipping down in the front center row, where words speak louder then actions and the drama in each hourglass sets its self free"- i love that part, in fact everything after that was pretty great as well. keep it up, man. this probably one of the best things i've seen you post in awhile. thanks a lot

lfdfforever
08/14/06, 10:57 PM
anything anyone?

lfdfforever
08/19/06, 07:42 PM
i am the killer

de la sympathie
08/23/06, 05:39 PM
i really liked this, especially the first half. good work.

ArTkY_
08/23/06, 05:41 PM
Yeah, I read this a while ago, haha. I like it.

lfdfforever
08/23/06, 07:37 PM
i really liked this, especially the first half. good work. thank you

lfdfforever
08/23/06, 07:37 PM
Yeah, I read this a while ago, haha. I like it. sweet