Listen,Hear And Bleed

[lfdfforever]

the back door leads outside
where the slient shadows seem to hide
the relaxing progress has a decrease of life
and we let it pass by our windows
where we sit and glue our blank stares to a hollow device

listen,hear and bleed
to the commanding lead

even the lessons fade to a buzzing static
we can't learn because we're to busying following the strong upper presence
he tells of joy never seen
and feelings never had
the meaing of happy crys to a sad extend
and we can't walk this sidewalks because fear has been spelt along the ground

fear is living in the air and any given breath locks weak lungs
you can't do anything
this matter is overheard
but under tryed against
these are the flaws we gave birth to and rasied as our own
we are the mistakes and we show no way for the lost groups of mankind

this cure is ill and the faith in hope has spilled

[a speedo model]

good stuff, man. i didn't really like the flow of the first verse, it seemed a little choppy and forced. but the rest is good. the last line in particular.

[lfdfforever]

good stuff, man. i didn't really like the flow of the first verse, it seemed a little choppy and forced. but the rest is good. the last line in particular. yeah i felt the first verse needed some work but thanks for liking the rest