read if u want to..

[yourcrimsonfear]

my wrists are bleedin
as i lay here broken
i need you here
dont leave
you warned me i know
now i realize your right
dont go out that door
im sorri baby
please dont leave me

my wrists are bleeding
as i lay here screaming
i need you here
come back
baby ill change
i swear
i cant lose you
its been 2 weeks
i still remeber those painful words

my wrists are bleeding
as i sit here crying
i need you here
just come back


-----LaRae

[yourcrimsonfear]

this isnt as good as it could be :blink:

[ben pequeno]

sigh.

[yourcrimsonfear]

sigh.


wut???

[Slaytus]

honestly...instead of writing about cut wrists and whatnot could you just kill yourself so i dont have to come into any more topics like this.
thank you
the managment

[lfdfforever]

yeah dont write about bleeding wrist, no one wants to read that, write about love or the downfall of pokemon

[OveriseFan]

yeah dont write bleeding wrist, no one wants to read that, write about love or the downfall of pokemon

Don't Pass Go/The Morning Of used to write about sandwiches.

That's pretty dope.

[wyverna]

yeah dont write bleeding wrist, no one wants to read that, write about love or the downfall of pokemon

I should do that.

[xllirikx]

way too cliche. no real meaning. boring. in all actuality, awful.

do the people that post poetry here actually read poetry. If you want to try to be dark in your writing, pick up a collection of Ann Sexton's of Jim Ferris's.

you have to read poetry to understand how to write poetry.