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shortone1320
04/12/10, 07:18 PM
A Riot for those Quiet

Mystery leads to intrigue
But can it bring you to me?
The unlikely leads to reality
I must be dreaming
It must be lying
But it appears I’m not
It’s been so long I forgot this feeling

Cute and quiet
My emotions start a riot
A riot cried
For the emotions once deprived
A song to feed the riot
For the quiet girl
That has become the center of his world

She hides her eyes
Adverts her gaze
Makes him think she is his heart’s demise
But he’s more than willing to give in
You put a smile on my face
No other can take away
That no other can even provide
My emotions riot
At just the sight of her
Don’t think she knows
His thoughts about her

A riot anthem
A riot of my heart
A mix of emotions
A riot for the quiet
This one’s for you
And you don’t even know

theDrunkPianist
04/12/10, 08:17 PM
That was good. I get the sense of what this song is about....been there.

The Indigo
04/12/10, 08:49 PM
A Riot for those Quiet

Mystery leads to intrigue
But can it bring you to me?
The unlikely leads to reality
I must be dreaming
It must be lying
But it appears I’m not
It’s been so long I forgot this feeling

Cute and quiet
My emotions start a riot
A riot cried
For the emotions once deprived
A song to feed the riot
For the quiet girl
That has become the center of his world

She hides her eyes
Adverts her gaze
Makes him think she is his heart’s demise
But he’s more than willing to give in
You put a smile on my face
No other can take away
That no other can even provide
My emotions riot
At just the sight of her
Don’t think she knows
His thoughts about her

A riot anthem
A riot of my heart
A mix of emotions
A riot for the quiet
This one’s for you
And you don’t even know
I bolded all the cliches. They make up close to a third of this piece.

Hugozhor
07/23/10, 06:34 AM
great

Hugozhor
07/23/10, 06:35 AM
uh

Hugozhor
07/23/10, 06:35 AM
uhh

Hugozhor
07/23/10, 06:36 AM
uhhh

Hugozhor
07/23/10, 06:37 AM
uhhhhh

Hugozhor
07/23/10, 06:37 AM
uhhhhhhh

Hugozhor
07/23/10, 06:38 AM
uhhhhhhhhhh

Hugozhor
07/23/10, 06:38 AM
uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Hugozhor
07/23/10, 06:38 AM
uuhh

Hugozhor
07/23/10, 06:38 AM
uuuh

Hugozhor
07/23/10, 06:39 AM
uuuuuuuuh

Hugozhor
07/23/10, 06:39 AM
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh

Hugozhor
07/23/10, 06:39 AM
uuuuuuuuuuuh

Hugozhor
07/23/10, 06:40 AM
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuujo

shortone1320
07/23/10, 01:43 PM
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuujo

having fun? lol

Hugozhor
07/27/10, 02:55 AM
I am sorry man. I needed some posts to be able to write new thread. Really sorry.

shortone1320
07/27/10, 07:28 AM
I am sorry man. I needed some posts to be able to write new thread. Really sorry.

understandable.... lol

pursuingdesign
07/27/10, 12:24 PM
love these.

shortone1320
07/28/10, 01:39 PM
love these.

this is referring to? lol

katiedontcryx41
07/28/10, 06:54 PM
nice

shortone1320
07/28/10, 07:01 PM
nice

thanks