And maybe you just thought it was a cigarette...

[OveriseFan]

Kind of a country/folk/Rock made for radio feel almost to this... It's kind of self-explanitory.

I never asked for an apology.
You did what you needed to do
To survive.
It's just kind of sad
To watch you die
At least it's with a smile...

How's that cancer been treating you?
I hear it's come to a pack
a day.
It's just kind of sad
to watch it
All go up in smoke...

Oh your life can turn to a ghost
Inside of blue eyes and burnt lips
Oh your life has turned to a ghost
I just hope it's not something I'll miss.

I never asked for an excuse
But you know life is hard on us all
these days.
I can't understand
why you'd throw it away
but I can't save you now.

Oh your life can turn to a ghost
Inside of blue eyes and burnt lips
Oh your life has turned to a ghost
I just hope it's not something I'll miss.

So tell me in the end, was it worth it?
A little sin doesn't bring redemption!

And then I never finished... Should I? I have mixed feelings about this... :(

[EmoPunkerGirl]

I think it's great the way it is....

[OveriseFan]

I think it's great the way it is....

The bridge needs finishing.

[EmoPunkerGirl]

I mean other than that it's great!!

[a speedo model]

i love the chorus. i agree, the bridge could use a little work. but i like this alot. good job, James.

[OveriseFan]

i love the chorus. i agree, the bridge could use a little work. but i like this alot. good job, James.

The bridge isn't finished :)

Thanks a lot.

[ArTkY_]

Its excellent.

I think the bridge is fine.

[wyverna]

I really like this. I'd love to actually hear it.

[OveriseFan]

I might record it, but since this isn't a good representation musically, I won't post this without something else...

[HereUntilDeath]

I like this. Really good job!!:)

[lightcollapse]

'blue eyes and burnt lips' is fantastic.