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thecurerocks182
08/30/06, 11:03 PM
I wrote this song when i was around 15-16 years old and i was just wondering what others thought of it... i know it is contrite but it comes with the age so i hope somebody gets something out of it

Cerebellum
Celestial and divine
Hair of luscious glory
Oh eyes that burn me
But i'd rather be rendered blind
than look away from the universe hidden in her eyes
Sunrise, Sunset, make the incision in the heart symmetrical and lets see whats really inside
And red like an old friend, i long to solve the conundrum that is a boy brushed orange turned a statute by a smile
cerebellum, cerebellum don't play this game with me now
cerebellum, cerebellum dont do this to me now
Lemon luck and looks, i think it do me best to listen to my own advice
i think it do me best to listen to my own advice

My head it swells and lifts like a ballon so im swimming in the hanging blue for now
The brunette with the nebulous smile keeps staring at me out from her away from home palace
If only i could cough the courage up to say...
cerebellum, cerebellum don't play this game with me now
cerebellum, cerebellum dont do this to me now
I'd kick and scream, kick, scream, my way out
Yeah I'd kick and scream, make symphonies out of ululations
Don't do this to me now

I fall apart like words whenever you' re around me
Sorry im not the prettiest of all the boys
I'm sorry, im not prince that keeps you from wanting to dream tonight
But for you i'm on a diet
Letting my insides do all the eating
But when it all comes down to it
you can't bring me down because I bring myself down
No, you can't bring me down bcause i bring myself down

lfdfforever
08/31/06, 01:19 AM
i'm drunkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

lfdfforever
08/31/06, 01:20 AM
it reminds me of circle takes the square, pretty good shit dude

thecurerocks182
08/31/06, 10:14 AM
i've never really listened to circle takes the square but thanks

HereUntilDeath
08/31/06, 11:57 AM
I liked it. If it had music to go with it, I am almost certain it would get stuck in my head. I think thats a good thing.....

thecurerocks182
09/06/06, 08:34 PM
Thanks a lot...i have music to it but the quality is questionable even compared to my new stuff

CT-Tim
09/10/06, 10:17 PM
The first stanza was pretty good. The other two left a bit to be desired.