Waking Up Is Hard To Do

[HereUntilDeath]

As I lie in bed staring at the ceiling these shadows that dance
across my walls suddenly notice me as I pull the covers up over my head.
And I doze off to my dreamland,
Where fairies dance and daffodills sing.
A place where I never have to grow up,
A place where gryphon roam in an open field.
Where sunsets smell like roses, amd loneliness
taste like a glass of fresh squeezed lemonade.
Suddenly I feel the hot of the sun on my face. And all
at once I realize as I always do. You have to wake sometime....




I know it's not that good, but I thought I'd see what you guys think.

[a speedo model]

i don't know about this one. it felt like i had read it before, there was just nothing new about it i guess. nothing to draw me in and catch my attention. it's not bad really. it's just not amazing. work on it, maybe. i don't know, sorry...

[HereUntilDeath]

Yeah. I think you're right. It was like 2 in the mornin and I couldn't sleep.

[thecurerocks182]

ya i agree, its alright...i'm no english scholar but isn't it the heat of the sun rather than "the hot of the sun"

[HereUntilDeath]

I think I did that on purpose. I don't remember.

[Cutiefacex3]

Not your best. I'm kinda dissapointed. I thought there was going to be some sort of meaning because of the title "Waking Up Is Hard To Do" I figured it was some sort of metaphor. But now it seems sort of frivolous.:(