Together Forever

[TillWeMeetAgain]

Will you love love me forever, or just for today?
It It's forever, please be true, dear god I pray.
If I tell you something you can take it to heart, because God only knows
from you I never want to part. If I were to lose you, it wuld be the bitter end.
Becuase only God knows, that your my one true friend.
So, hand in hand, side by side, you and Ihave a true love that we will not hide.
So, face to face, heart to heart, together forever. We will never part.






Thoughts??

[thecurerocks182]

i think it is very straight forward and could be done better, but i like how it sounds very sincere

[HereUntilDeath]

I agree. And what a nice thing to say.

[a speedo model]

sorry, but i didn't like it.

[lostfear]

too many references to god. or at least that gets old if you plee to god or mention him in every song, soon it becomes a redundant theme. music and faith can go together. I have no issues with that. but the way you use it is cliche (the popular slam word of this forum) and kind of cheesy. but you have the right idea. just to try to branch out. I'm sorry if I'm being to harsh.

-Jake