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ArTkY_
09/01/06, 04:23 PM
About time eh?

cheers,
here's to new years
here's to new fears
cheers,
drink up, son
from this cup that
holds curses from God himself
fireworks... they spread like the pain from our sins

(stronger)
cheers,
here's to new years
here's to new fears
cheers,
drink up, son
from this cup that
holds curses from God himself
fireworks... they spread like the pain from our sins

(climactic ending)
we lie and
we lie and
we lie and
we lie and
this is our chance to make it right
every time we've ever felt alone
any time we've ever felt afraid
any time we've ever wanted more
we can sum it all up in this resolution
i believe in you
i believe in you
i believe in you
i believe in you
i believe....
i believe....

I just don't believe in myself.

Fin.

Made this up while trying to tab a Mineral song, haha. Its all clean and has that indie-emo sound. Very late... very repetitive. Kinda cliche, but I like this. Captured my emotions on New Year's pretty well.
a speedo model
09/01/06, 04:45 PM
i like the "climatic ending" part alot and i love your ending line, the first two stanza's were good but not great. this is good but definitely not the best.
ArTkY_
09/01/06, 05:40 PM
Josiah, you're cute.

Thanks for liking the best part of it *****!
a speedo model
09/01/06, 05:55 PM
Josiah, you're cute.

Thanks for liking the best part of it *****!

haha

no problem, man. :)
OveriseFan
09/01/06, 05:59 PM
:appl:

My second favorite, possibly favorite.
HereUntilDeath
09/01/06, 07:00 PM
I love this one. Great job.
ArTkY_
09/02/06, 08:13 AM
Thank you very much guys.
Cutiefacex3
09/05/06, 06:24 AM
For some odd reason the end reminds me a lot of my father.. very...I dunno...hard to explain, I liked it.
ArTkY_
09/15/06, 06:35 PM
bump
CT-Tim
09/15/06, 06:41 PM
Not bad at all. I think it's just really hard to stand out using the New Years theme because there are so many pieces on it. The only one I can really think of that stands out is Thursday - Jet Black New Year.
OveriseFan
09/15/06, 07:19 PM
Not bad at all. I think it's just really hard to stand out using the New Years theme because there are so many pieces on it. The only one I can really think of that stands out is Thursday - Jet Black New Year.

DEATH CAB FOR CUTIE NUCCA!
ArTkY_
09/16/06, 01:32 PM
Not bad at all. I think it's just really hard to stand out using the New Years theme because there are so many pieces on it. The only one I can really think of that stands out is Thursday - Jet Black New Year.
I agree. But I tried my best and I'm happy with this song. There's some other good New Year's songs, I just can't think of them.
DEATH CAB FOR CUTIE NUCCA!
Truly.