Water In The Forest

[lfdfforever]

stay strong as i fail to stand brave
we haven't had such comments
on this reaction, it acts out in
fear and despair
located in that "somewhere"

a infant award wheels my way
do i keep the small prize
or will i realize, that i'm
not in a humble state of mind
my plastic watch is fine at keeping the right time

we group and divide
like we have something to hide!
my fear loves your despair
and it gets us to that certain "nowhere"
i can take the award but i
can't live with the prize
all my elders know its no surprise

hold us high and drop us fast
turning back may reenact
the reaction of all this trouble
it acts likes a broken bridge
the water spills clean and neat
the forest environment accepts defeat

[lfdfforever]

bump

[a speedo model]

good stuff.

[lostfear]

not bad at all. I really like some of the lines. they're clever.

[lfdfforever]

good stuff. thanks pal

[lfdfforever]

not bad at all. I really like some of the lines. they're clever. well thank you kind sir

[lfdfforever]

any other thoughts

[HereUntilDeath]

I really like it. It's one of my favorites by you. Keep it up.

[lfdfforever]

I really like it. It's one of my favorites by you. Keep it up. thank you very much

[BridgesFolly]

i agree, some of the lines are clever, which is always my favorite part of poetry.

[lfdfforever]

i agree, some of the lines are clever, which is always my favorite part of poetry. thanks a lot gangster