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goyoyofosoco
09/06/06, 09:32 PM
I'm missing home, because home is where my heart is, even if I can't remember how the whole thing started. And, this November, I hope you know that we'll be pardoned for the crimes that you and I have never committed, and the wishes that I have cast into the skies will be more than worth the price that asking placed onto my pride. The greens and blues and hues that you have never thought would be of use, often enough to be deserving of a name: All your colors make me hover far above the ground I used to love to stand on.


I'm floating through the atmosphere of consciousness, and having fear inside myself that no-one else could ever measure:


Up to all the expectations that I've been facing after placing you in future destinations, wherever they may be. Up to the way you speak to me and wreak your havoc, openly, and make both of my knees go weak, with cheeks as red as they can be. Up to the faces you've created while I've sat and meditated while dying for the vacated lips that your words come from. Up to the part of me you've changed, when you walked in and re-arranged the numbers on some torn-up page in the biography of a bum.

HereUntilDeath
09/07/06, 07:48 AM
I like this a lott ,keep it up.

goyoyofosoco
09/08/06, 11:46 PM
Thanks, HUD. I'm glad you like.

wyverna
09/09/06, 12:36 PM
Oh wow, this really impressed me. Much better than I expected.

a speedo model
09/09/06, 03:44 PM
excellent. really great job, man.

goyoyofosoco
09/11/06, 11:25 PM
thanks, everyone... it's always nice to satisfy those who aren't easily swayed.

parallelism
09/12/06, 12:25 AM
Damn, this was so good.
Great work.

de la sympathie
09/12/06, 03:17 PM
I like this alot. Looks like the poetry forum's getting at least a few good things back, huh?

Great work. I expect to see more from you of this caliber in the future.