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OveriseFan
09/27/06, 06:57 PM
These suck, but hopefully the ones I post later tonight will redeem them. I mostly love two lines in the verse and the ending line. And no, I really do not care if the last line reminds you of NFG.

I'll take back everything,
Just to have anything:
A kiss, your lips, a touch...
Something to remember
I swear you're my September.
Summer girls are just that:
June, July, and August.
So don't believe, don't believe...
Don't believe that you're not special
Listen up! You're beautiful.

(I'll probably write a second verse-of-sorts.)

I never said that I didn't love you.
ArTkY_
09/27/06, 07:06 PM
you know
where we come from where we go home
yeahhh

time for me to actually read this.
ArTkY_
09/27/06, 07:07 PM
The whole thing reminds me of NFG. Its blehhh.
OveriseFan
09/27/06, 07:18 PM
The whole thing reminds me of NFG. Its blehhh.

Oh my God

Send me that song you just listened to!

And yeah, but I have a song about Aliens I'll post tomorrow.

You'll hate it. haha.

It's not really about aliens.
matt_rawlings
09/28/06, 02:47 AM
I think the line "I swear you're my September" is great, but I ain't big on the rest at all
iHATEapril
09/28/06, 05:06 AM
It's okay, not amazing. My songs are about other stuff.
a speedo model
09/28/06, 05:57 AM
i'm not too crazy about it
OveriseFan
09/28/06, 03:41 PM
I think the line "I swear you're my September" is great, but I ain't big on the rest at all

That's the line I love.

And is the most 'true' thing I've ever written I think...
OveriseFan
09/28/06, 03:42 PM
It's okay, not amazing. My songs are about other stuff.

Good for your songs?
lostfear
09/28/06, 03:47 PM
keep that one good line and use in it in another song dude.

it will be in girls infos everywhere.

haha
OveriseFan
09/28/06, 03:57 PM
^Yeah, I know.

And please let this just fall down, don't post on it anymore. If you do, I'll just delete it. I don't want to do that though because otherwise you'll think you're going insane.
black rose
10/01/06, 08:09 AM
I swear you're my September.

amazing.
ArTkY_
10/01/06, 09:49 AM
keep that one good line and use in it in another song dude.

it will be in girls infos everywhere.

haha
hahahaha
OveriseFan
10/01/06, 06:50 PM
keep that one good line and use in it in another song dude.

it will be in girls infos everywhere.

haha

That is why I write.

hahaha.
wyverna
10/02/06, 08:42 AM
That is why I write.

hahaha.

Can I use it as my new MSN name?
OveriseFan
10/02/06, 06:25 PM
Can I use it as my new MSN name?

MSN? Sure.
wyverna
10/03/06, 09:10 AM
Sweet.