Endless Goodbyes

[PatHeTic_PUnK]

Endless Goodbyes

Good Byes so long that they no longer exist
Playing with my hair kissing my neck
You make it so hard to let you go
You holding me again us trying to say goodbye
It’s cold out. It’s just you and me there
Everyone else has disappeared they are no longer there
That one night once I’ve made it home
I lye down and think about the day
No words I can say will describe how I feel
The tears poor out of my eyes. A shiver down my spine
And all this time it is you on my mind
As I pull the covers on top of me
I wish you were there right next to me
Your hands on my back. Down my thighs
Your lips on mine. Then on my neck
As we lye there you hold me tight.
You tell me you love me and will always be there
Once again we are back to were we started I start to cry.
Only to think I will have to say goodbye
So once again I live this story through
Not knowing if it will end with goodbye or start with hello
But what I do know for sure is that I love you!

[Wubby]

Hey I like it, the kind of lyrics/poetry I enjoy reading. I'm a shameless sap for that kind of stuff. Keep it up!


-kade

[PatHeTic_PUnK]

thanks ill try to keep it up lol =) thanks for the coments lol

[GREENatarisDAY]

i can honestly that was one of the worst attempts to write ever, flame me if you want but im serious, that was total shit. You were very descriptive but you were almost too descriptive and it just didnt go together, the whole poem was very distorted and poorly constructed. but yea whatever, good try anyway

[PatHeTic_PUnK]

w.e man, give me a lighter and i will flame you

[tmlfan]

i thought it was beautiful i loved every word i love u alana