check it

[GREENatarisDAY]

like it or not, im putting it up here

Looking back and walking in circles
inside my lonseme head
Trying to let go of this wish
and accept the words you said
But no light seems to break through this sealed door
and your far too bright to ignore
my eyes aren’t the only set that notice you
the more time I have gives me
a better taste of my loss
everything good comes free
and the bad things have their cost

I’m torn between this and the rest of my life
I wish I could erase this all
so I can sleep tonight

so you will forget
while ill still try
and you can live
while I will die
so let me go because you’ve strangled me long enough

and this conversation is of whats left
now I wonder if there was anything at all
I fell right into you but you weren’t there
weren’t there to catch me
now your calling my name
when there is no one left to call
break my heart but not my fall

[decisionpending]

they are pretty good, i enjoyed reading them, not cliched or anything like that, just cool emo-ish lyrics :)

[BuriedAlive]

another average song... but yet probably better than mine since im not good at writing songs plus im only 14 and havent had much experience

[rkchick]

so good!
discribes my situation actually.
song kicks butt.
14 as well.
not much experience.
only hope some day I'm as good as you.
my eyes r watering right now.
powerful words,deep.

[GREENatarisDAY]

just browsing thru the old pages and that song kicks soooo much ass!!!

holy shit kids im 17 now and that song really blows, i wrote that three years ago

[ArTkY_]

well it certainly doesnt suck but... deep? cmon wtf? not really deep at all. but simple and decent sounding... im only 15

everything good comes free
and the bad things have their cost

that was pretty good. though thats the exact opposite of me