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GREENatarisDAY
06/12/03, 12:49 PM
yea so i wrote about this girl i know who is really struggling through this stuff with this guy and yea....
some people could call this a song or a poem but whatever

She’s lost in him, being dragged along
doesn’t know if she’s wrong
all she knows is she hates being neglected
good for kiss, it’s the only thing
that he’ll miss
she never felt a need to be protected
drowning in his sickening pool
using her like a tool
now he’s just lost the use
she’s had enough of his abuse
she called him up and gave him hell
apparently she’s not doing well
and she knows he doesn’t care

cold nights where she wont sleep
she knows now true beauty is only skin deep
you’re better off without him

Still left starving for a taste of attention
sex written all over the face of false affection
broken hearted and feeling reluctant
she wants him back but knows its worse
feels more worthless than an empty purse
she’ll listen to the saddest songs over again
left alone with a broken heart
she’s reached the end and doesn’t know where to start
“to hell with him” she says (but she never means it)

MestUpKid463
06/15/03, 06:20 AM
wow I really like that one... it actually reminds me of one of my friends.

Fobika!
06/15/03, 11:34 AM
no offense but it looks like shit to me. you were too anal and tried to rhyme everything.

IAmCountryMusic
06/12/05, 12:25 AM
:spam:

kimosabe
06/12/05, 04:41 AM
wow I really like that one... it actually reminds me of one of my friends.
is this friend of yours an alcoholic retard with cancer? if so, i can see the similarity.

IAmCountryMusic
06/12/05, 05:13 AM
man you suck more now than you did when you had no writing experience

sunpoison
06/12/05, 05:36 AM
man you suck more now than you did when you had no writing experience
hahahaha

ArTkY_
06/12/05, 04:38 PM
Fuck this song.

punkpixie
06/13/05, 05:39 AM
man you suck more now than you did when you had no writing experience

Zinger. hahahaha

GREENatarisDAY
06/13/05, 10:45 PM
guys, get a life, this shits very old