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sumdiddy35
06/15/03, 03:30 PM
YOU MAKE DO THING I DONT WANT TO DO.
TO MAKE UP FOR ALL THE BULLSHIT YOUVE BEEN THROUGH.
BECUASE YOU SUFFER I DO TO.
YOU THINK YOUR HELPING, BUT YOU HAVE NO CLUE.
IM ON THE VERGE OF SUICIDE, BECAUSE OF YOU....

YOU MAKE ME CRAZY,
YOU ARE BLIND.
IF YOU PUT TOGETHER THE PIECES IN MY MIND.
YOU WILL SEE, THERE ONLY ME.
A MESSED UP KID, A CATASTROPHY.

MY HEAD LWAYS HURTS, BECUASE YOU SREAM.
I GET SHARP PAINS, AND YOU SEEM.
TO NEVER CARE, BECUASE YOUR MEAN.
SELFISH, RUDE AND DISGUSTING.
YOU LIVE MY LIFE, AND THERE THE THEME.
TO THIS SONG THAT I SING....

YOU MAKE ME CRAZY, YOU ARE BLIND.
IF YOU PUT TOGETHER THE PIECES IN MY MIND.
YOU WILL SEE THAT THERES JUST ME.
A MESSED UP KID, A CATASTROPHY...

AND I REFUSE TO FIGHT YOU
ANYMORE............
I REFUSE TO CARE
ANYMORE........
I HOPE ITS FUN LIVING MY LIFE!

GREENatarisDAY
06/17/03, 11:35 AM
it wasnt that great, a little on the angry side, but is that supposed to be about feeling opressed over some unreasonable parenting or something cuz thats what it sounds like and i would know

k32081
06/17/03, 08:42 PM
I think lyrics come from the heart and it is awesome that you have written these, but try not to rhyme so much because sometimes being able to predict the last word of any verse/chrorus/bridge/breakdown/etc. can become monotonous. but overall, good job!