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wishxfulthinker
06/15/03, 06:38 PM
Disconnect all your thoughts
Every assumption that was wrong
All your fallacies about my life
You never knew me all along

Leave everything you've awakened
Every emotion now embittered
With so many memories of better days
Lost and drained and withered

I guess it's more than you could say
Your words caught with the too many things you feel
But You Still Break My Heart.
Though it's nothing I plan to reveal

Your killing me, your killing me
Your pushing me, your pushing me
When this blows over and life gets slower
I'll be fine, if you leave in time

For every letter that's spilt across the page
With the tears you claim to have spent
Is another thought and wasted word
That I'll read and only find resent

FightBackMcfly
06/15/03, 11:07 PM
hey man just wanted to say thats some pretty good stuff

PeeDster
06/17/03, 10:33 AM
Originally posted by FightBackMcfly
hey man just wanted to say thats some pretty good stuff

punkrocprincess
06/19/03, 09:35 AM
i love that. i think it's great.

BustaNutz
06/19/03, 04:27 PM
Good deal

badreligionist
06/20/03, 11:48 AM
actually i think this is quite good. its sorta teen angst-like but its still really good. but it does make sense to me and the fact that i havent heard much songs that talk about this....soo.... good job