tell me what you think....it's a little...harsh.

[wishxfulthinker]

I'm not attracted to dramatics
The truth that unfolds under your skin
is seeping through a little too obvious.

The sweat that pools beneath your nervous eyes
scream oasis to your dry and bitter lies.

You can't look me in the face.

I can just see the lips.
Rolling on your finger tips.
... Of the bottle that's now sundered across the floor.
The shards reflecting your shattered face.

I hope it hurt like hell.

Splinters of glass reflecting nothing more
then a hollow disgrace.
To the history of love
and every fucking embrace.
That fired through my veins, and pulsed through my pride.

Every night I held you is another night disarmed.

I am liable to your intentions.
A white flag for your black heart - I am an easy dismissal.
Flutter your fingers in my departure
and I'll show you a finger much harder.
And when you walk me to the door
I hope your legs tear through the floor
with your guilt and disgust I hope you're devoured in the dust.

I'm not attracted to dramatics
The simplicity of love is astounding
But you've had me fooled.

All the world is a manipulated stage and I'm
your fucking marionette.

[ANARCHYPUNK420]

I think thats great actaully, i write too, i have been for 6 years and im only 16. i really like that song...its not too harsh its perfect