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OveriseFan
10/15/06, 06:29 PM
(I had a first part, but it needs perfecting. I hope you love the ending. I do.)

She needed to teach me how to kiss
Said I was doing it all wrong
I guess that's what I get
For learning from a song...

Never kissed her again

Well I do fall in love sometimes
Only problem is: Can't make up my mind
And every smile after smile
Leaves me wishing I was blind...

Or at least less attractive.

ArTkY_
10/15/06, 06:58 PM
haha, I love this.

a speedo model
10/15/06, 07:06 PM
i like it.

OveriseFan
10/16/06, 05:25 AM
The ending is pretty much the greatest thing I've ever written.

hahaha.