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wishxfulthinker
06/17/03, 05:18 PM
It's a simple thing
That tortures and fades
As time is blissed
It's my aching to be
waiting and somehow grown
But I've learned nothing
Of this

Hold on to the moments
That leave you always
In greater desperation
Longing to have noticed
Everything that you've touched
For all sensation

Bitter for your glory
And the stares that build you
Harder to own or grasp
And hazy rooms are sweet
Blinder then what I want to see
Before me a way to run at last

Take all you've learned
And throw into me
Show me all you're made of
Then leave and let me alone
Risks defying my motives
And finding greater love

Pull me if I'm falling
Even if I don't want to be
Where you always are
Where you leave behind
A greater moment
A greater mind
Find yourself in a place
Where nothing moves
Anything less then grace
For time is bliss
And time is this

It's a simple thing
That tortures and fades
As time is blissed
It's my aching to be
waiting and somehow grown
But I've learned nothing
Of this

DriveTBSthru
07/03/03, 05:36 AM
i like your user name and its ok.

hopeshavefallen
07/03/03, 07:29 AM
I like this one a lot better than the other ones i have read in this forum...


Keep working at them.

DriveTBSthru
07/03/03, 07:35 AM
i guess it is better then the others.