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wishxfulthinker
06/17/03, 04:20 PM
The sounds in the room are lost
I can only hear your heart
And the words that drip from your eyes
And fall into my palms
Your hand in mine will catch the words
That I thought you'd never say
As ever fear and pain diminish
You breathed them all away.
Hands and eyes and arms
Are the only things I feel
The darkness wastes away everything
But makes this moment perfect
The window castes a single light
Dawned silent along the bed
Illuminating sillouhettes
And the words are kissed instead

A moment was never more entangled
Of hearts and body and mind
A moment was never more disregarded
Of anybody else or time
And a moment was never more aware
Of every thing you do
And there's never been a moment since
Hell, there's just nothing like you

KiSSDONTKiLL624
06/23/03, 06:54 PM
Wow i really like that one. Do you have any more??

boxcar racer
06/27/03, 03:33 AM
i remember writing over a 100 poems about the good stuff... things change...

thisoldromance
06/27/03, 03:50 AM
thats really good.i have trouble writing bout stuff like this.but if i feel it i can describe how it sounds on paper

Lueda Alia
10/28/04, 12:48 AM
man... i totally love all your poems. they are so good.

burnt_effigy
11/04/04, 06:17 PM
It's always harder to write about positive experiences- but you made it come alive so subtly. That takes such skill. I love this.

mOvielife99
11/07/04, 05:22 PM
good work, i really enjoy it

JustLikeAMovie
11/08/04, 01:29 PM
i love it

thepunkpig
11/08/04, 06:37 PM
i really like it. its deffiantly really awesome