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RufioOwnsYou
06/17/03, 05:01 PM
Silence is fear
Fear is pain
Pain is hate
Hate is war
War is Suffering
Suffering makes hope
Hope makes savior
Savior makes thankfulness
Thankfulness leads to love
Love leads to obsession
Obsession leads to anger
Anger leads to lonliness
Lonliness leads to silence
Silence is Fear
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some feedback would be nice,

-Hit me when I'm down, or don't hit me.

decisionpending
06/17/03, 05:40 PM
thanks for that, yoda

RufioOwnsYou
06/17/03, 05:59 PM
acually, wrote it a few years back, right after I got my room painted black, no one home.... just thinking, just how it goes I guess.... never thought about how similar it was to the speech yoda gave in episode 1, thanks for pointing that out, maybe I should have shared something else.

RufioOwnsYou
06/17/03, 06:03 PM
Yeah, thought about it like 2 seconds, didnt want you all to think im a plagerizing bastard, so heres another p.o.s. poem I wrote. I love critisizm.

Wind the rushing wind
Mighty and mysterious
Sacred and lucritive
Like a statement of power
It rushes into us
Pushing against us
Holding us back
Making us want to attain the unatainable even more
Eating at our souls

decisionpending
06/17/03, 06:06 PM
was just messin with you, i dont like poetry so im not gonna visit here again