For everyone who wants to feel something else

[wishxfulthinker]

I will grow older
And your presence will still exist
My reflections get crucial
for an emotion other than this

A sanctuary from your drug
All your seditaves consume
And drain me of my drive
My ambition left to resume

Whatever heart that's left to waste
Whatever pride you didn't take
I need an emotion other than this
Cause this one keeps me awake

So I'll pretend pure bliss
Bleeds through my teeth
And act like my demise
Isn't corupting beneath

To disrupt all quiet remains
Everytime I reminisce
And its desperate that I feel
An emotion other than this

[Scoobydumb56]

that was awesome. i enjoy poetry a lot but my poems are usually really cheesy but that probablly cause im young

[decisionpending]

that is really cool! put music to it and you have an awesome song there matey!

[punk_rock_poet]

wow that was really really good and i love all ur writting. u should turn them into lyrics!

[Used]

That was really really good. I wish I could write like that! Well good luck, maybe you can make them into lyrics and be really famous. . lol!

[boxcar racer]

ess. the ones you fall in love with....

[boxcar racer]

"Whatever heart that's left to waste
Whatever pride you didn't take
I need an emotion other than this
Cause this one keeps me awake "

ive expanded on that feeling in a couple poems... there's a lot more there then can really be seen on the surface..

[Lueda Alia]

sooo good.

[JustLikeAMovie]

nice word usage, it's good to not see the same thing written in the same way in everybody's poetry.