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06/22/03, 08:05 AM
1.No title.

As I silently scream
The words just won’t come out
Why is this so hard?
Why does this have to be so bad?

It could have been great
If you gave it a chance
Now we’ll never know
You blew it, no turning back

I sit on my bed
I’m barely dressed
I’m waiting for you
But I don’t think you are coming

I’m listening to the calm storm
With it’s calm winds
It’s like a whisper
In the back of my mind

Our diminished love
And your diminished confidence
Is too much for anyone to bare
But there’s nothing that we can do now

You’ve lost this fight
With your false facts
And your gorgeous smile
Won’t haunt my dreams anymore

2.Shining Star.

You shine through a dark mystical blanket.
And light up my life,
And pierce through my heart.
You always believed in me,
Saw me through the night
You keep me safe in my most secret fantasies.
Your outstanding brilliance was more then I deserved.
Your stellar shine for all to see.
Dazzle, glitter
Illuminate, shimmer.
You were with me at my darkest hours.
When night was an extinct memory in my mind,
I’d anticipate our next affair.
I wish I may, I wish I might,
I wish for the scandalous twilight.
When the time comes, I’ll know
Because you’ll be there with your burning smile
And I’ll be there with my lightened heart.

punk_rock_poet
06/25/03, 01:58 PM
thats really fucking good and i wish i could rit like that! uve got real talent so keep writing! u sohulf get a website cause i wanna see some more of ur writting

chiefxcel
06/25/03, 04:18 PM
very well done, you're a gifted writer.. keep it up.. lets see more

boxcar racer
06/27/03, 04:30 AM
its so weird how, i know excatly what you were feeling when you wrote those...

its so funny how the first one so sharply contrasts the second one... where they about the same person, cause ive got the same things going on..