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alexelizabeth
11/03/06, 05:09 PM
I am a raper, a murderous figure in the shadows.
I live off of flesh and the pain of individuals.
In realms of bliss, I am a god.
I will devour you without a single thought.
I have no sympathy.
I tolerate no weakness.
When I have you in my grasp, you are mine.
Like a black widow spider, you will die at my (p)leasure.
I will not subside to your pleads.
Once I start, I do not stop.
This is the end of everything.
I am the end of everything that you have ever known.


P.s. i thank antichrist_superqueer for some input
funkypunkrocker
11/06/06, 09:03 AM
thats good its realy different ( for me anyway ) what is it about?? :-)
OveriseFan
11/06/06, 09:13 AM
In the first line: Do you mean rapist?

This is pretty awful, and is just like... dark/evil/gory for the sake of being it. There's not really anything that connects the reader with it, and it's just... It's like those poems/songs that are "I hate you. I wish you'd die."
a speedo model
11/06/06, 09:42 AM
What James said.
RomeoAGoGo
11/06/06, 12:17 PM
What speedo said.
kissbangkill
11/06/06, 12:26 PM
what the three people over the age of 13 above me said.
OveriseFan
11/06/06, 06:34 PM
what the three people over the age of 13 above me said.

hahahaha

I like you.
black rose
11/06/06, 07:47 PM
i don't mean to be a bitch but....
i think it's funny how you try to be all pete wentz like and use the () thing with pleasure.
when leisure is spelled differently.
hah.

i would like to meet this antichrist_superqueer person.
Harold Wood
11/06/06, 07:52 PM
just like pete wentz


I want to take a poop on your face


/thread
black rose
11/06/06, 07:54 PM
just like pete wentz


I want to take a poop on your face


/thread:nono:
i never said that pete wentz was a bad writer,
nor that she shouldn't try to be as an amazing song writer as he is.
just that she failed.
Harold Wood
11/06/06, 07:56 PM
:nono:
i never said that pete wentz was a bad writer,
nor that she shouldn't try to be as an amazing song writer as he is.
just that she failed.

I still want to poop on pete wentz


I stand strong!
black rose
11/06/06, 08:00 PM
I still want to poop on pete wentz


I stand strong! educate me.
Harold Wood
11/06/06, 08:02 PM
educate me.

he is in a gap commercial


I meeeaaaannnnnnnnn!
black rose
11/07/06, 06:30 AM
he is in a gap commercial


I meeeaaaannnnnnnnn! i see.
but he was amazing before the gap commercial :-)