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tbs152
06/23/03, 10:33 AM
let me know what you think bout this lyrics just do me a favor dont steal them its happened to me before thanks

"The Book On Girls And Contradictions"

So tell me how this works
Do you set fire to your
Security blanket when your sensing evil lurks
Not knowing who or what is knocking on the door
Do you crush the light bulb and the lamp
When your scared of the dark
Explain how this works, take me to the camp
Where these secrets will help me embark

These words are grains of salt
Burning in my wounds
Swearing I know this isnt my fault

So the stories are true
Nice guys always finish last
Is the same to be said of you
How we're bound to be a story of the past

I swear this isnt my fault (x2)

And I'll lie awake tonite
Alone to contemplate this
Your mistake and how its not rite
Toss me away even before a kiss
So is this how Im bound
To always end up
Lost alone always how Im found
Again you'll be quoted "just shut up"

These words are grains of salt
Burning in my wounds
Swearing I know this isnt my fault

Why waste your precious time with me
And my lack of dark and evil secrets
I'll never be cool or bad enough to be
Finishing first, I'll mark it on the top of my list of regrets
So I lack all the right or wrong words
My mind just isnt that good a poet
Left washed up sleeping on splintered boards
Sorry I'm not that way Im not able to be it

I swear this isnt my fault (x2)

So the stories are true
Nice guys always finish last
Is the same to be said of you
How we're bound to be a story of the past

These words are grains of salt
Burning in my wounds
Swearing I know this isnt my fault

I swear this, this isnt my fault




"The Warnings Not Taught At School"

So this is the story she wrote
Every word inked in fiction
In it she does all she wants and gloats
About the boys she'd conquer in a fashion
Ever glamourous for a killer
Still a line of boys is drawn
In search only of dark room and her
Now broken hearts are found littered across her lawn

Warning: Not for the faint of heart
A beautifully cloaked killer
Warning: Not for the faint of heart
A poison kiss to remember

Now I've found the lost chapter
The one on the nonexisistant evil of me
Looking for where you tell of your dagger
How it spills my blood how you planed to be
And she is so proud just to know how
She can turn boys on and off like a light
No matter what they do not to allow
Her as she crushes them just to run lost in the night

Warning: Not for the faint of heart(x2)

And I guess I just wasnt enough fun
As she decided to put an end to this
With her brand new purchased gun
Do me this, seal my murder with your kiss


Warning: Not for the faint of heart
A beautifully cloaked killer
Warning: Not for the faint of heart
A poison kiss to remember

Now your story it reads
Like the view of a barrel of a gun
Left with nothing but beads
Of sweat wishing it was over and done
Just give me fair time to run away
From this game she plays on me and all boys
Hoping to only forget this day
Where she smashed me and threw me out like old toys


Warning: Not for the faint of heart
A beautifully cloaked killer
Warning: Not for the faint of heart
A poison kiss to remember

So at least I can give you fair warning
Warning: Not for the faint of heart
So at least dont make the same mistake of me
This is your warning of her

As she did it and sealed it, kissed and signed "Thanks Again"

xXsosheburnsXx
06/23/03, 12:40 PM
congrats on them.. you should definitely keep writing more!:D

yelovinyl
04/03/05, 05:42 PM
amazing old posts kick ass! Woohooooo!!!!!!!!

rkchick
04/04/05, 08:33 PM
dude,
these lyrics kick butt. keep writing. promise I won't steal them though, I know how that feels. like someone just coned you out of your fame.

Azrael
04/04/05, 08:45 PM
nice, very TBS, but i guess i'd get that form your name. =p
i like the first one alot. good analogy with the salt and the wound.

tbs152
04/05/05, 06:25 PM
those lyrics are more than a year old thanks for nice words guys i'll have new stuff soon hopefully with mp3s too